The 7 Steps I Use to Writing an Engaging Blurb
Jan 23, 2025
Why do we write a blurb? I get this question a lot - what is a blurb, how do we write it, what do we use it for, do we even need a blurb... (the answer is yes to the last one, without a doubt). In this blog post, I'm going to answer a few of these questions and help you craft a blurb that will attract the right readers and help you get your book out into the world. Here's the first big question:
Why Do We Write a Blurb?
Think of a blurb as a handshake—it’s the first impression your book makes on a reader. A good blurb grabs their attention and makes them think, I have to read this!
Here’s why we write blurbs:
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To Hook the Reader
- A blurb gives just enough detail to spark curiosity without giving everything away. It’s your way of saying, “Here’s why this story is worth your time.”
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To Set the Tone
- Whether it’s a funny romance or a dark mystery, your blurb gives readers a taste of the vibe they can expect.
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To Show What Makes Your Story Unique
- Is it a fresh twist on a classic trope? A lovable, quirky character? The blurb highlights the special sauce that makes your book stand out.
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To Help the Reader Decide
- Readers browse books like we scroll through movies—they want to know if the story is their style. Your blurb helps them figure out if your book is a good match.
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To Sell Your Book
- Let’s be real: the blurb is a major marketing tool. It’s what makes people click “buy,” pick your book off the shelf, or add it to their library queue.
A great blurb is like a movie trailer for your book—short, exciting, and impossible to ignore. It’s your chance to show readers why they’ll love your story!
If your blurb stinks, it doesn't really matter how good your book is - you probably won't reach a lot of people with it. In an information-rich world that is constantly vying for your attention, we have a lot of things to sort through in a day. A book blurb that isn't well-written is going to be the first book discarded, simply because we have too much on our minds.
No worries, though - that's why I'm here. Let's talk about the seven steps I use to write my blurbs, and how you can use these method to write and refine yours, too.
Step One: Start with a Hook
Your opening line is your first impression, the moment you catch a reader’s attention and pull them into your world. It needs to be bold, intriguing, and completely irresistible. Think of it as the spark that ignites their curiosity and sets the tone for your story. Whether it’s a mysterious question, a high-stakes dilemma, or a striking visual, this single sentence should leave readers desperate to know what happens next.
Here’s an example: "A world on the brink of war. A woman fighting to save her family. A secret that could destroy them all." It’s short, punchy, and loaded with intrigue. Right away, the reader knows they’re stepping into a story filled with tension, personal stakes, and life-altering secrets. A strong opening line like this lays the foundation for your blurb, making it impossible for readers to walk away without wanting more.
Step Two: Introduce the Protagonist
Introduce your protagonist in a way that immediately connects readers to their journey. Give them someone to root for—a name, a hint of their struggles, and a glimpse into what drives them. This is the moment to spark empathy and curiosity. Who is your protagonist, and why should readers care? By briefly highlighting their central conflict or goal, you create an emotional anchor that keeps readers invested in their story.
For example: "Isla, a fiercely independent blacksmith, wants nothing more than to protect her family and live in peace. But when a deadly prophecy targets her village, she’s forced to confront a past she’s tried to forget—and secrets that could tear her world apart." With just a few sentences, readers get a sense of Isla’s personality, her stakes, and the larger forces threatening to unravel everything she holds dear. It’s this connection that will make them eager to follow her journey.
Step Three: Set the Scene
Transport your readers into the heart of your story’s world by painting a vivid picture of its setting. In just a sentence or two, bring your world to life, adding layers of atmosphere and intrigue. A well-crafted setting not only enhances the plot but also invites readers to escape into your story.
For example: "In the mist-covered village of Thornebrook, ancient forests whisper with secrets, and every shadow hides a forgotten legend. Here, the line between myth and reality is razor-thin, and danger feels just one step away." This glimpse of Thornebrook sets a haunting and immersive tone, making readers want to discover the mysteries waiting to unfold.
Step Four: Highlight the Conflict
Every gripping story has conflict at its core—an obstacle or challenge that makes readers lean in, eager to see how it’s overcome. Introduce your protagonist's central struggle in a way that grabs attention and ignites curiosity. The stakes need to be high enough to make readers care about what happens next.
For example: "When a mysterious letter arrives, revealing an old family secret, Mara must choose between protecting her family’s legacy or risking everything to uncover the truth. But as danger closes in, every choice threatens to shatter the fragile peace she’s fought so hard to protect." This setup creates immediate tension, compelling readers to wonder what Mara will do next.
Step Five: Tease the Stakes
Leave readers on the edge of their seats, eager to know what happens next. Raise the stakes without revealing too much, keeping the suspense high.
For example: "With a dangerous truth lurking in the shadows, Mara finds herself at a crossroads. Will she betray those she loves to uncover the answers she’s been searching for, or will the cost of the truth be more than she’s willing to pay?" This leaves readers questioning what decisions Mara will make, while heightening the tension around her choice.
Step Six: End with a Call to Action
Your closing line should leave readers excited to pick up the book. Make it personal, emotional, or action-packed.
Example: "Perfect for fans of political intrigue, forbidden romance, and dark secrets, The Shining Betrayal will leave you breathless and craving more."
This is your final push to convince readers that your book is exactly what they’ve been looking for.
Step Seven: Keep it Concise
A great blurb is short and punchy—usually between 150 and 200 words. Avoid long descriptions or too much backstory. Every sentence should add value and spark curiosity.
Writing a blurb doesn’t have to be daunting! By following these steps, you’ll create a blurb that hooks readers, builds intrigue, and showcases the heart of your story.
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